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Make it longer; change the music
Make this longer. I can't describe to you how many stick fight scene flashes are on the portal. If yours doesn't stand out, it'll die with a 2 or 3/5 and never go anywhere.
Also, please change the music. Who gets their ass kicked to whiny, angsty, teenage crybaby-core music?
lol wat
This is really good for your first flash
Make their mouths move when they talk. It doesn't have to be perfect, but at least let them have anime mouths (the two-frame open/ close mouths). Also, try to make this longer. You could definitely keep going off from the "barrow in the graveyard" scene. You have good material.
I personally think Runescape is annoying and boring, but this was still a pretty good cartoon. Keep it up!
Reading your review made my day. We are going to start working on our second flash which will include mouth animation and we are definatly going to use our "barrows" material again. We'll try to make it longer too. Thanks again for the review :)
Looks good
But make it longer than twenty seconds...
Well, glad you like it, even if it is short! Theres a 5minute feature based on this thats gonna be ready real soon. I just had so many setbacks with it that i was just bursting to show something to the newgrounds viewers! Thanks for watching
It looked great, but shitty jokes.
What the guy below me said. It looked like you were pushing for Family Guy humor and miserably failed. Excellent job on hte animation, though!
:/ i liked the jokes oh well
thanks anyway
Eh...
It was kind of boring. It was funny towards the end, though. It wasn't bad, good job!
Yeah
kickass
that was fucking awesome
well thanks. Why I'm replying to this, I have no idea.
haha
yeah... um that was weird... um stop that...
Pardon? Heheheh, thanks for the review =D
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